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Feeling alive

Now I feel my heart, beat
Unlike I ever did before
Maybe I was incomplete

It is something indiscreet
That I think I adore
Now I feel my heart, beat

Too long in a backseat
Shame, I want more
Maybe I was incomplete

Savory, bitter, sour, and sweet
As I explore
Now I feel my heart, beat

It feels quite concrete
Whatever be in store
Maybe I was incomplete

A romantic conceit
Can knock on my door
Now I feel my heart, beat
Maybe I was incomplete

I’ve been wanting to write a ‘Villanelle’ for quite some time. And here’s my attempt at this fascinating form of poetry. Hope you enjoy this. Comments are welcome!

6 responses to “Feeling alive”

  1. Nope, Not Pam Avatar
    Nope, Not Pam

    Love it, it worked so well, the words made my heart beat

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you. I was so anxious about this one ♥

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Your villanelle is beautiful! The repeating phrases all make sense and have left me feeling that there must be more to this personal evolution!!

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    1. Thank you! They make sense? I was not so sure but I find this form fascinating.

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